Good work for a novice writer. The novel has potential. It's just that the streams of events happen very quickly.The characters are well written. If the author continues to improve himself, I'm sure his future works will be outstanding. I hope the author doesn't lose his motivation.
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LIKEAnathaShesha:Bless you sir š„¹. I have a new novel Iāll be releasing in about a week and I hope you find that my writing has improved even further!