Review Detail of WoahBuddy in Adventures Of A Goblin

I read only the first two chapters. What I like about the story is it has inspiration from Kumo desu ga nani ka and involves a goblin perspective. People who have read fan-fics or seen manga/anime know what this story entails, like leveling and fighting. The biggest issue for this story would be the writing. The author should work on when to end or extend a sentence and when to start and finish each paragraph. The writing style resembles drawn-out poetry as it's most likely written by a foreigner practicing English writing. Punctuation is another issue of when to use commas, periods, exclamation points, etc. Another problem is when to use plurals or not. Overall, I would rate this as a 2/5.