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mad_jackal
mad_jackalLv11yr
2023-06-12 21:37

This is a really not good character to write a story about. The mc is a massive idiot that is struggling to understand basic concepts and I understand that it could be interpreted as a type of shock I doesn't make for a fun read. The most annoying thing is that the author is trying to explain the basics of the genera to us through incredibly repetitive sentences that if were cut out would shrink the story by half and pace it better. I tried to read more but I couldn't get past 15 chapters. I assume this is a first at bat and if so this will help get the author some writing experience and help them make something better later.

Adventures Of A Goblin

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ShamelessGengar
ShamelessGengarLv1

I really only read the first chapter but I like the theme. I'll withhold any comments and let people decide for themselves whether they enjoy it or not. Just dropping this review here to encourage you to keep writing, I like the non-human MC, novels.

1yr

pankaj12407
pankaj12407Lv2

Novel is good but MC talk too much. And too much care free. Author writing is good. But MC little frustrating. He doesn't understand his situation.

1yr
Catastrophy_Y9
Catastrophy_Y9Author

Ahem Ahem, Author here. I decided to do a review on my book after completing the life of the Goblin in the Dungeon, and that took me two volume, a total of 102 chapters to make. The next volume, will entail the life of the Goblin outside the Dungeon, I hope you stick around for that. The first volume covers the Goblin trying to adapt to his environment, and the second volume covers the Goblins growth, from having a low self esteem to being confident about himself, and also his battle with the Goblin king. For those who are not really a fan of character growth but prefers and overpowered character, then I suggest you start reading from chapter 70, only downside is that you are going to miss some aspect of the story. Before closing, I want to use this moment to appreciate all my current readers from sticking by me, I couldn't have come this far without you guys, really, thank you. I will be happy to answer any questions anyone of you might have, be sure to leave it down below the reply section. One last thing, you do know it won't take much out of your time for you to leave a review right?, now be a good boy/girl and do just that.

1yr
Pragmatico
PragmaticoLv15

Read what was free for a reference point. The good: I like the thorn manipulation it’s unique and I haven’t seen it used before. Updates are pretty stable as well. The bad: grammar is worse than what an eight year old could write. Wrong words, misspelled words, wrong tense, commas and periods randomly used with no rhyme or reason. I understand this might not be the your first language but you choose to write in it. Also the world building is not there at all yet. The readers know nothing about the world he is in. Not going to use coins or FPs to continue reading but good luck

1yr
Kevin_Henriquez
Kevin_HenriquezLv14

For support!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1yr
Daoistsvu2aB
Daoistsvu2aBLv1

Reveal spoiler

1yr
Nihirvana
NihirvanaLv13

honestly a true hidden gem, I just had to binge q,q but now despair has set in I've caught up. for those looking for a monster mc with a good story this is it. At 200+ weve just started the kingdom building aspects and I've gotta say I'm pumped.

1yr
Alejandro_Islas
Alejandro_IslasLv1

Hola, Ascensión de un duende donde la encuentro?...........................................................................................................................................

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