Review Detail of Yamette_Kutasai in DxD: ReKiba

To put it bluntly, I was disappointed with how this fanfic turnout, considering how high the ranking of the fanfic is. I read a lot of bad fanfic, so that's saying something. That said, to be fair with the author, I had only read till 4th - 5th chapter, so I guess I was a little earlier than usual before I drop the fanfic. Don't get me wrong, the plot has potential since a Kiba SI is relatively rare. The author writing is pretty decent for a fanfic as well, so I guess that's a plus there. However, everything else is just... bad. If I had to describe the novel into one word, it would be 'Unnatural'. It feels like the characters surrounding the MC is being hypnotized and the world being bended to the MC's will. This includes his unreasonable dislike and behavior toward Rias as MC arrogant enough to show his dislike compared to his own survival. It feels really uncomfortable to read for me.