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Jose_Escobar_0585
Jose_Escobar_0585Lv11yr
2023-10-29 07:22

Con solo capturar a miu y tener intencion de llevarlo a ser todo lo que pueda ser ya me gustó mucho la historia por no hablar de que en enserio siento curiosidad sobre como sera con otros pokémon porque hubo unos pokémon que ash desperdicio seriamente su potencial por enfocarse en otros debido a su favoritismo como su cyndaquil su Bulbasaur y otras más que tuvieron la oportunidad de brillar entre los de su especie si el hubiera puesto el esfuerzo asi que espero y está serie si siga

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Fallen_Crown
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Fallen_Crown
Fallen_CrownAuthor

I will go back to the story when I have time. For now Im in some pressure due to university work.

1yr
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Jose_Escobar_0585
Jose_Escobar_0585Lv1

Ah bueno con solo saber que si la vas a continuar es suficiente así que gracias ✌️

Fallen_Crown:I will go back to the story when I have time. For now Im in some pressure due to university work.
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Zaelum
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Not bad, well wrote, a self-insert Ash. An AU. A pretty good combination that can make a really interesting Pokemon fanfic. Good Job! If I can see enough chapter and it keeps with the same quality I wouldn't mind joining your patreon or something like that! Also Harem for LIFE!!!!

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MR_DOBRYAK
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i kinda liked that. waiting for more. where are chapters man

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simpp
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plssssssssss update i promise to stone u daily...................................................................................................................

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DaoistjcJwtW
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Cuando vas actualizar la historia de Pokémon es muy buena la historia seria bueno que fuera como red aprenda el aura y aprende defenderse utilizar estrategia decente sigue la historia de Pokémon casi no hay historia tan buena de Pokémon de las que tienen ????

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Boeira
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A Very interesting take, beside the update problem and some Minor errors on writing It is a good read.

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KrisUnderworld
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This story is developing quite successfully. Also, it's nice to see that Ash decided to try to catch Meowth. In most of the works there was no such thing, not even a hint, and it was not explained well enough to truly believe in the hero's impotence before the capture of Meowth. In short, I'm glad that the hero is looking for new ways, and not cardboard, like from other fan fiction, which sometimes happens. Keep writing, and I will look forward to the release of new chapters in this story. The fun is just beginning, right?

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Kameron_Dias
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Una buena historia espero que vuelva a subir más capítulos 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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DaoistFy7x0V
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It's really good I enjoyed every chapter just hope you will keep updating chapter this story is too good to only have 4 chapters. ...........................

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John_Zambrano
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Hey men, me encanta como comenzó y creo que así como has desarrollado one piece estoy seguro que con tu mente podrás desarrollar grandes escenarios para este fanfic de Pokémon. Estoy esperando con ansias. Te sigo desde hace ufff estoy al día con tu fic de one piece. Pero tengo grandes expectativas con este fic de Pokémon. Es curioso después de leer tu fic de One piece quiero escribir el mío propio. Osea tu ya eres mi inspiración. Y No quiero hacer publicidad pero así mismo me pasó con un fic de Pokémon. Me encanto tanto que comienze a escribir el mío mismo tengo gran confianza en ti para que nos des a tu lectores el mayor espectáculo en lo que escribes de este fanfic. Animos y gracias amigo 👍

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