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Original5
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This one got me really hooked, the development of Erik, the background and others, it's all interesting and am so into it! Although if there's a minor problem it would be the lack of new characters, i think the author should continue adding a few interesting side characters that will be close to MC, (the bullies are too 2d to my liking) i get a bit bored and somewhat depressed when its only the MC, that's why am recommending this. Afterall a story is all about the life of a main character and even in real life there's always that one moment we have a person or people by our side! Either ways, interesting story, good job author! I'll be sure to read on! Adios~

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PilgrimJagger
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yeah, i will do a lot of characters, don't worry. In the first chapters there was only Erik because it was set during the first two days. As for the bullies, it was only Logan. There was no further development in his case because there was much to tell and not a lot of space to do it.