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Coldman
ColdmanLv42yr
2022-11-10 02:15

Instant 5 stars just because it's a LOTM story. Though, after I have read some more, I will revisit this review and expand on what I like and dislike :)

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d3m81
d3m81Lv3

I have not noticed any problems in grammar or sentence structure and the plot is not far enough yet to give my opinion but it seems good for now. Also extra points for creativity with the author choosing the Abyss pathway for the mc.

2yr

FoodReviewSnake
FoodReviewSnakeLv4

Nothing to read here.................... Dropped

2yr
ParagonDaoOfBS
ParagonDaoOfBSLv14

It's messed up, but LOTM fic so I have no choice

2yr
Knife_Monopoly
Knife_MonopolyLv14

More LOTM is always good. Also, wow Abyss Pathway?? Bold choice considering it already has a God, a GOO lurking to control it, 3 living established families that control the pathway and the near universal dislike of everyone else. Man's skipping Hard Mode and went straight to Nightmare Difficulty. Very interested for more.

2yr
YATOOO
YATOOOLv2

I personally love the evil MC and I have no problem with that. But killing the Children in front of his family Just because he's bored, that's something else. I don't know what you're trying to do here, But I know It's no one cares about watching MC kill everyone for no reason.

2yr
Angelleevrncc
AngelleevrnccLv2

great, don't forget to update it.... because I'm waiting for it................................................................................

2yr
_Alenkar
_AlenkarLv3

Reveal spoiler

2yr
Fasa_Rera
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