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ViejoVerde
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2024-03-29 00:00

Maybe it’s my fault, but after reading fantasy systems by the same author, this feels like a copy paste with a futa MC of the other. True It have decent smut, but knowing that the overall plot (and harem) it’s a 80-90% the same takes it a lot of the fun out of the book

Perverted Fantasy Evolution System

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