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too cliche and unoriginal,boring to read

the story feels like it has been written by a kid. .. authour can illustrate what he is saying clearly. .. .grammatical error though not Demotivating you keep it up. ..

starts with a cold ruthless protagonist who only care about his maid to a MC going out of his way to save strangers who he doesn't even know and deserve to die instead and he also wants to kill them but he doesn't and after that playing forced matchmaking in others family drama.......................I wish webnovel had an option to rate negative stars as well.

There are things that don't make sense.Not original.I wish it was as good quality as your Raphael story.<<<<>>>>>There are things that don't make sense.Not original.I wish it was as good quality as your Raphael story.

There has quite a lot of hate due to the protagonist having a similar background to another fanfic. The hate is honestly stupid since its the story follows a different direction then the other fanfic which people supposedly believe this to be a copy which is false. it starts off cliche it starts branching off and follows a different path. The protagonist Neo is quite enjoyable to follow as he uses everything in his disposal to his advantage such as him not being afraid to change the course of the story to benefit him and his use of Denial of nothingnes is quite creative. If you are a fan of fate might as well give this a try it’s quite entertaining.

Writing quality is a bit bad but better than most other fate fanfics ironically. Author is basically cheating the plot with intermediate protagonist skill which kinda makes the whole plot cliche yet somewhat believable.

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i haven't read it yet but i'll gave 5 stars for the cover.