Review Detail of AvatarLOK2 in PJ: The Son of Ares

This is the first percy jackson fanfic that I have read that has a si as a son of Ares. It's good. Most of them usually have overpowered protagonists from the get-go and while this one might become overpowered sooner or later, he had to work for it. You've given a good outlook of the ares cabin and haven't demonized Clarisse so that's a plus. I like the way that the protagonist is thinking. He not only trains but actually reads to get information. It is a very good beginning to what I hope will be a long story.