An amazing world building marvel story. So far there has been relatively little typically ‘marvel’ aspects of the story but I can’t wait to see them come into play. The only minor complaint is the grammar and spelling are a bit off but that will hopefully be edited overtime so overall would recommend this!

I really am loving this story so far I can't wait to see where it will go as more chapters are released

had to give this story a five-star review because it was so good if you are a little wary about reading it don't be I was too and was immensely grateful that I decided to go through with reading it.

I was a little wary to start reading this after seeing ur other fics that aren’ updated regularly. But, everything kingdom building is a must read and the pace is perfect. Please don’t give this up, I would happily pay a patreon.

Overall, great story. Some minor words that is either missing or misspelled. Great idea with the story and the development. Only thing i can criticize is how fast and weird it is to read it in the star, you get over it after a chapter or two but it feels like the Mc has no emotions, it’s just straight up dialogue in the 3rd person. Excellent story, hope to see more.

it is almost a perfect marvel (kingdom building)story, the most perplexed part is the update speed. if that part kan be performed wel. dan dit is perfect

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Loving this so far I cannot wait to read more!! The world building has been great and cannot wait to see where you take this story in the future!!!!!

The story is fantastic but the languaje is a problem. I would recommend have someone proofreading the chapters before being published. Even so it’s entertaining and i wish you luck