Review Detail of DaoistoisMLq in Harry Potter : Silver Slytherin

As a writer and a fan of the HP IP, I can honestly say, I've read better shit scrawled in fecal matter on the wall of a public restroom. First off, it comes off as pandering and uninspired, explains itself too much and lacks any real heart or soul. I wouldn't bother reading, or investing in the "Author". Your time would be better spent elsewhere. Kind regards, an honest critic.