Review Detail of Lol1san in Odyssey of the unrivaled beast king
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Dude, did you forget to upload some chapters or parts? After all, how can a novel with so much potential be so messed up from the start? As soon as the guy reincarnates into the kid's body, he accepts everything quickly. You don't give any explanation or information about the man. Then, before we know it some things, we find ourselves in the awakening ceremony. There's no information about that either. Then, after the ceremony is over, we find ourselves in an abandoned town. I mean, it's really a great achievement to make this novel so trashy and so awful. And really, in chapter 3, how did Mc talk to John? He couldn't talk at first and he was gesturing. In short, it is so brainlessly written that please use your brain before writing a novel, even if you don't try a good work. You're the worst author I've ever seen.
Odyssey of the unrivaled beast king
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So you need a chapter about his past life, another chapter on how he gets reincarnated into a new boy, and another for awakening... seriously, if you want me to tell you everything and can't use your brain. Then you are free not to read. Also, this is the beginning why would I dump unrelated info into the chapter when it wasn't needed yet? Besides, I am not surprised with your review, according to your past activity. Most books only received 1star to 3 stars from you. Thus, I could say. it is not the author with a problem but you.
So you need a chapter about his past life, another chapter on how he gets reincarnated into a new boy, and another for awakening and the town... seriously, if you want me to tell you everything and can't use your brain. Then you are free not to read. Also, this is the beginning why would I dump unrelated info into the chapter when it wasn't needed yet? Besides, I am not surprised with your review, according to your past activity. Most books only recei