Review Detail of feistyfox72 in I Swear I’m not a Hero [ A Cyberpunk fan fic]
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It is great. Author did great so far at putting both emotion and meshing characters well into the story so far. Nothing feels particularly forced. Story development is going good so far. If you want something to improve on i‘d suggest combat. It was great last time, I just mildly remember getting confused about what happened when the final big boss bad guy entered the scene. It had something to do with a shipping container I think but maybe I just was reading it wrong yk. Sometimes that happens yk.
I Swear I’m not a Hero [ A Cyberpunk fan fic]
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no problemo. I shall. This is the best cyberpunk fanfic I’ve read, although I haven’t read allot of cyberpunk stuff. :)
SweatySnail:Thank you for the review! I’ll revise that fight scene, It was indeed a little confusing. I hope you continue enjoy the story! :)
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feistyfox72:no problemo. I shall. This is the best cyberpunk fanfic I’ve read, although I haven’t read allot of cyberpunk stuff. :)