Writing Quality: Its an amazing story, no grammar issues that is obvious from reading it. The premise of the story is about an Indian Football/Soccer player who was kicked out of the Indian National Team and then he got a system that grants him the ability of past football players. But it might sounds boring but it isn't, the author approaches this and turns it into something wonderful. It makes it seem like you are the MC himself with how he approaches stuff such as contracts and business deals as a footballer. My only concern is how he writes it almost as if it is a Wuxia novel with some of the dialogue, which annoys me at times. But it can be passable I guess. Story Development: The pacing of the story isn't too fast and not too slow, its progresses steadily as it should with a football novel, perfect pacing almost and how the business side of football is handled is accurate and I enjoy every second of reading it. How he progresses as a character really resonates with me also. Overall a flushed out character. Character Design: Basically real life footballers and people almost. The MC is of course fictional and there isn't a picture of our MC but that is fine. Updating Stability: It updates once a day, so it is consistent in updates but when there isn't an update there will be one in a few weeks so it updates pretty well. World Background: The world background is just football in real life almost. It takes place in 2015 to 2016 so far and I hope we can see more. Hope this review help you venture into the novel, and I hope you have a great reading.
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