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Z46Edelweiss
Z46EdelweissLv32yr
2022-11-15 00:22

You have a good writing skill but you still lack a little bit for example your word Fighter jet is a incorrect plane jet engine take air from the front and compressed it and mix it with fuel and vola you get thrust Planes that have jet engines installed are know as jet planes and planes that use propellers for example Fw190,Ju87,ju90,BF109,bf108 that you mentioned in your novels are all propellers driven planes , and the Plane Ju90 is a big plane its not for carrier operations where else the JU87 which is dive bomber and also a torpedo bomber is suitable for carrier operations and the Fw190 is a dive bomber the Good thing is that unlike the JU87 the Fw190 can defend it self against fighters and it has a good dog fighting abilities hope this helps

Third Reich:Iron blooded imperial

Poo_Koo_007
4.3
265 Chs

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Poo_Koo_007
Poo_Koo_007Author

Your military common sense really amazes me, I did think about using better planes, and even thinking about whether to add some fighter planes that didn't appear, or even add some modern elements, but if you do, it's good for history and readers Disrespect. I've been busy with my academic exams for a while so I've postponed the update, but I'll upload the other manuscripts I have in hand

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Poo_Koo_007
Poo_Koo_007Author

Tribute to the heroes of history. Writing this chapter, my heart is actually in awe. The end of the Polish Knights represents the end of an era. Gone are the days of riding a horse to conquer the world. When I heard about this history as a child, I was blown away. The knights used flesh and blood to fight against the steel body, knowing that it was death, but still launched a death charge for the people who were born, the Polish Knights honored him and paid tribute.

2yr

Aleksic
AleksicLv13

I dumped it because the women in this novel are actually behaving like todays spoiled Chinese brats who think they have any power over men especially 1916 Germany sorry but women had no power then

1yr
Akuma_Senpai_2941
Akuma_Senpai_2941Lv2

I see Third Reich, I 5 star. All you need in life is the Reich. All you need in life is the Reich. All you need in life is the Reich.

1yr
Poo_Koo_007
Poo_Koo_007Author

In my setting, Leon is a young man who has returned to the past due to accidents, he is the abbreviation of ordinary people, from timid and afraid to decisive, step by step to control the German Empire to conquer the world

2yr
Poo_Koo_007
Poo_Koo_007Author

I'm excited to write my own novel, maybe it's not that good, but I still hope to give it a good result

2yr
Trafford
TraffordLv6

More update? More update? More update?More update? More update? More update?More update? More update? More update?More update? More update? More update?More update? More update? More update?More update? More update? More update?v

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Blutmond
BlutmondLv3

Good

1yr
Tomasz_Gruszka
Tomasz_GruszkaLv3

I would like to know if the book was drooped it is so good so it is a shame if it was dropped

2yr
Santiago_69
Santiago_69Lv13

1 star only because there's no system but has the system tag and also the overpowered tag.

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