Review Detail of BobbyBrowne in Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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Reading this novel is so incredibly frustrating. For the first 30 chapters or so I was really enjoying him grinding his way from rock bottom to become something, but my man is literally the most nerfed thing in existence. He trains for 18hrs a day and his progress is literally snails pace compared to the other kids who just sleep in class and do some basic exercise. I have never seen an mc with worse talent, but then something happened. The MC awakens his chakra and performs a jutsu incredibly quickly! Ok I'm fine with him being human trash as long as he has at least one strong talen..... Nevermind author said no and he immediately gets nerfed so the snail's pace continues. Even his intelligence gets nerfed somehow and he goes from being smart to an actual primate who is loud and obnoxious, cheers author thought you were going to give him something but nah, how stupid of me. This is already a pretty long scathing review but I can't help but touch on the side characters, they suck. Aside from the old man who i like the side cast the author comes up with(not in naruto originally) are genuinely just terrible, awkard cardboard cutout attempts at characters. They are like a trash harem cast, their personalities can be explained in 2/3 words and i would genuinely prefer if the author replaced them all with nerfing the mc even more. Like why even write a naruto fanfic and just make walmart versions of the original characters instead of using the originals. It would be like me making a bleach fan fic with my new main character ichibo kugosaki who uses a spear and is loud and belligerent, not to be mistaken for his sidekick rubio who has double d breasts and can't stop saying b-b-b-b-bbbaka when Ichibo gets too close to her. I get making up an original character or two to add some spice but just pretty much replacing the main cast makes no sense. This is way too long lol but thanks for reading
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My point still stands that he gets stronger at a snails pace compared to everyone else. If at 200 chapters he's not even a chunin the issue is even worse than I thought. In the anime Sakura becomes a chunin by only punching people and using next to no jutsus, horrible when you look at the mc. If he stands out in a class where everyone is a failure, that doesn't make him a genius, just barely average. I think its major cope to think that he is anywhere near strong if after 200 chapters of relentless, 24 hour training for what I'm assuming to be years, he loses to a single punch from 10 year old Sakura who doesn't train at all.
Arawn34:The other kids trained for years while the MC is a nobody that was reborn in a malnourished orphan body... The other kids are not improving faster than him, not a single one of them. he was just so far behind and needed to get caught up. By chapter 200 I don't think even the genius girl in his class can win if he goes all out and they fight to the death, and she had training from a Jonin along with rank A Jutsu on top of a 5-6 year headstart over the MC. The other kids would get crushed quickly. At the rate he's improved people mistake him for a genius for his age bracket and he started so far behind. Idk how far you have gotten but if you like more than just OP MCs that get strong instantly I'd continue with the novel, now that he's in the war Arc and seems to be real close to Chunin power levels It's getting real interesting.
The other kids trained for years while the MC is a nobody that was reborn in a malnourished orphan body... The other kids are not improving faster than him, not a single one of them. he was just so far behind and needed to get caught up. By chapter 200 I don't think even the genius girl in his class can win if he goes all out and they fight to the death, and she had training from a Jonin along with rank A Jutsu on top of a 5-6 year headstart over the MC. The other kids would get crushed quickly. At the rate he's improved people mistake him for a genius for his age bracket and he started so far behind. Idk how far you have gotten but if you like more than just OP MCs that get strong instantly I'd continue with the novel, now that he's in the war Arc and seems to be real close to Chunin power levels It's getting real interesting.