Review Detail of Compelled_reader in Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

My review of the Naruto: the outsider's resolve Writing Quality : A few grammars mistake in every other chapter. 4/5 Stability of update is fantastic. 5/5 Story development: I got around the mid 30's chapters. My honest review is that it slow... Like really slow. I like how the author delved deep into in the mc feeling, thoughts, and psychology but it taking to much space. I mean started jumping ahead saw that in currently chaps 170s he still a Genin. I at least expected him to be chunin by then but he wasn't. 3/5 Character Design is ok, not much to it. 3/5 World Background is great, each chapter goes in detail of the world. 4/5