Review Detail of The_Paragon_White in Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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Horrible, I thought I had already read bad Naruto stories, but this one surpassed everything with the protagonist who does not show any personality traits, and the ones he does show are of an ignoble and useless person, anyone with meta knowledge of the universe could do better.
Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve
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You’re a Sargent….and a detective…? A grown ass man, calling other people Betas and complaining about naruto fan fiction. You have to be trolling me
The_Paragon_White:I am an ex sergeant, brother, go to the academy and work as a detective. What do you know? Also, no one has called the beta up for discussion....
Cewu:you hate it when the MC reminds you of yourself? huh? Too bad you don't hold a candle to his resolve.
Are you okay, brother? I felt like this comment was more of a statement to himself, but don't worry. I didn't even reveal it in my heart anyway, it's hard to do that when it came from someone who is just a random NPC within my life, well, I might be overestimating its importance.
Cewu:you hate it when the MC reminds you of yourself? huh? Too bad you don't hold a candle to his resolve.
The_Paragon_White:Are you okay, brother? I felt like this comment was more of a statement to himself, but don't worry. I didn't even reveal it in my heart anyway, it's hard to do that when it came from someone who is just a random NPC within my life, well, I might be overestimating its importance.
Bro you most likely don’t even go to the gym or be in the military and you think you could become a competent shinob? To train for half a decade consistently?
The_Paragon_White:Are you okay, brother? I felt like this comment was more of a statement to himself, but don't worry. I didn't even reveal it in my heart anyway, it's hard to do that when it came from someone who is just a random NPC within my life, well, I might be overestimating its importance.
I am an ex sergeant, brother, go to the academy and work as a detective. What do you know? Also, no one has called the beta up for discussion....
King_of_the_noobs:Bro you most likely don’t even go to the gym or be in the military and you think you could become a competent shinob? To train for half a decade consistently?