Review Detail of Kelly111 in Naruto: The Outsider's Resolve

It's a boring read. Author makes a pretty good character but the biggest problem I have is that there wouldn't be a difference if there was no reincarnation. The MC feels and acts like an average or below average intelligent OC. Simple fact of the matter is that it shouldn't take so long to learn some things especially with the adult mind and the brain plasticity(not sure if its the right word) of a child. Obviously his initial situation is a problem but still shouldn't be as big of a problem either the author is making things unnecessarily difficult or the protag just sucks. Then again this is a free fanfic and I usually like this authors work. So maybe there's something I missed or this novel just isn't for me.