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Phantasma_1
Phantasma_1Lv142yr
2023-03-08 15:41

it's pretty good so far it's filled with interesting characters, the main professors that help our protagonist in particular are some of my favorites. Only complaint is the time skips can be jarring I wished they were implemented more naturally instead of jumping straight into the new segment with no acknowledgement. Anyway I hope you keep going strong I need to see our mc rise to the top and get some waifus in the way🫢

I will ignore my storyline.

Stylish_Demon
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warriorofnorth
warriorofnorthLv15

i like 90% of this novel, the bad 10% is story skip,many times the mc is doing 1 thing then suddenly he is in another time and place, or he is doing 1 thing and in the next chapter he is in another time and place, becase of this i really wanted to give this novel a 1 star becase i cant read a novel like this, but since everything else is good about the novel then it wont be fair for the author so i will leave it at 4.4 rating, am dropping this novel but am willing to come back and read again if the author edit his novel from chapter 1 till the latest chapter, removing this story skip, note:there is a difference between time skip and story skip, am fine with time skip as everyone else think its fine,but the author is not doing time skip he is doing story skip

2yr

Stylish_Demon
Stylish_DemonAuthor

I am here to inform abt mistake on my side, actually a series of chapters has been repeated unknown to my knowledge an error seems to have occurred in the [Timer Publishing system] I have addressed this issue to WN, but unfortunately, already published chapters can't be removed sry guys 😭I will re-arrange the stock pile as soon as possible!

1yr
ItsNEVERduck
ItsNEVERduckLv14

I like this story a lot. Stylish Demon can I help you by editing this story for you? I can help you fix it so the English is top-notch. I'll do it for free.

2yr
Daoistphs351
Daoistphs351Lv2

I like this story a lot and hopes it will be interesting in the future as well and be of more chapters

2yr
RayanArcadia
RayanArcadiaLv14

This novel is poison, I wouldn't recommend people to read this. The grammar is extremely bad, half of the stuff happening in the novel doesn't even make sense. The mc is a retard who's got no IQ. Events randomly take place out of nowhere accompanied by haphazard time-skips. Poison testing this novel equates to "Death".

1yr
KaiaMai13
KaiaMai13Lv15

Overall, this would be a great story if only there was an editor to fix all the grammar, run on sentences, and spelling mistakes. Also, there is a lack of consistency with the names of characters which is slightly annoying when trying to read. If you can ignore those things the story is great.

2yr
_Junior_H
_Junior_HLv12

Can you erase the repetitive chapters they eating my passes thank you

1yr
Royalmv
RoyalmvLv4

When's next update Author?😫 also post a time table of when you will post the chaps it will be useful for you and us readers so you can also keep track of time 👍

1yr
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