the story deserves 5 stars. the power progression is interesting and the character is engaging. the only problem i can see manifesting is that you are spending too much time with the main cast of HXH, the most exciting thing about your approach for star wars was that you took to exploring some lore and giving the mc the liberty to disengage from the constrains of canon
GnomeBob
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