I will keep it short. Interesting Concept But Bad Grammar, No Character Development, Hollow Side Characters, Lack Of Common Sense, Almost Everything Is Confusing, Interactions Are At NEET level.

I know this may sound stupid to some people I want to know is this a harem...? ps:I hope this is not a harem

gawd atleast make a research when making your ff, everyone has a spirit soul but not everyone has a spirit power thats why not everyone can cultivate what an idiotic author

dude you are making it overpowered I mean really rank 12 before age 6 before proper soul awakening

I like these book very creative in its certain ways like using different spirit for the amount of spirit ring to have so mc incorporate the idea in tgd to use in douluo very nice, some other book i read that are best and okay use same wish or has a system but these is much better for the potential of its uses

I like the story pls more hehe.. update update update update

it's a good novel. You could improve it but it's still ok. You could slow down the mc's power is growing too fast for the story timeline or create a story out of the original characters.

Well... The grammar is BAD, you can see it that there are errors within the first few words.... let see how this goes. Personally, i want author to write êṙôṭîc Řl8 chapters and the girls i like the best are Xiao Wu, Ning Rongrong, Zhu Zhuqing, Bai Chenxiang from the speed clan after being powered up and breaking through rank 38 by fixing her spirit, Bibi Dông, Qian Renxue and finally, Liu Erlong.

4 stars. looks quite promising! now all that's left to do is wait, and see the next 50 chapters.

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