just please don't drop in the middle I'll will give you PS every day just dont drop this kind of FanFiction 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

The story was good but the first year ran on way to long for it to only end with them losing the game they never should have been in. Then in the second year he is more coach than player and its honestly boring and tedious to read.

i like the story so far, but would appreciate more chapters to binge read them or the raw/MTL site you use :)

an excellent work considering its a chinese author. what's the raw name. please do tell.

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I know it is MTL so I won't comment on the grammar but I am loving the story. I like this new Sawamura Eijin.

It’s an interesting development. I hope you continue the story instead of ending it so short

the next chapter please i reaaly like tihis story

The translation is... The best way to describe this story is death by a thousand Chinese idioms. Someone is thirsty? Like the bird that flew under the waterfall to- There's downtime and the team starts chatting with each other? Brother I am the long finger. Hah, as if! If we stretched you longer you would explode. A thumb is- Someone on the opposing team seems a little too excited to play? They take us as lambs to the slaughter. Treating us like soft persimmons... It's endless Chinese idiom bladder. And it sucks because the story underneath the Chinese stuff seems pretty solid. Fun at the very least. This needs a real translation imo.