Here are the good and bads of this novel: •Good• 1.The premise is great and the main character has a good head on his shoulders. 2.He—as in the Mc— is smart and doesn't want attention till he can use or manage it to his benefit. 3.Another plus is that he doesn't get overpowered from the start. •Bads• 1.Grammar is horrendous. Too many grammatical errors, typos and misspellings. I'll suggest that Author get an editor, download Grammerly or just try to improve their English proficiency. 2. The dialogue isn't the best and the character representation is average at best. All in all, the novel is worth reading and if the English is improved, it will be among the best DC and Marvel Fanfics. I hope this helps. Thank you.
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