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alex02373
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LIKEoriginal world. it's only a fanfic because Alex's skill allows him to summon all kind of characters.
95_novel_maniac_95:which world would it be in?
Yo love your story so far, and I believe it has tons of potential but plz can you not have the mc become a simp like in your pokemon fanfic (not tryna be disrespectful) I dont mind if he has someone he likes and is kind to her, but just dont have him act dumber and stuff around her. Anyway thats just my input, its your story and you can do what you like. (Ill propably end up reading anyway lol.
Thanks, I guess? not sure why you call my other charater from the story a simp but ok. But you're right that I rushed the Romance of my other story and that's why many had a problem with it. Even if it got better later. The first impression is extremely important. I intend to build it up slowly and not add any Romance for the time being. Don't worry this isn't my first book anymore.
DaoOfcrow:Yo love your story so far, and I believe it has tons of potential but plz can you not have the mc become a simp like in your pokemon fanfic (not tryna be disrespectful) I dont mind if he has someone he likes and is kind to her, but just dont have him act dumber and stuff around her. Anyway thats just my input, its your story and you can do what you like. (Ill propably end up reading anyway lol.
by harem I meant at most 3 to 4 members who like or love him,it doesn't have to be big that it feels crammed, I always believe in the saying that harem can be good if written write, so if you are up for the challenge then do go ahead otherwise I will still give it a try and see how good of a story it is
alex02373:I haven't made up my mind yet
I'm slightly interested merely because I know your other book but that aside the synopsis doesn't at all draw interest to the book so I suggest adding more to it
alex02373:original world. it's only a fanfic because Alex's skill allows him to summon all kind of characters.