So far from what i read the story is good it sucks you in and wanting more to find out what happens nest. The ocmc is good his powers are original and not to op.His lovers are the main cast plus some i Would of like to see an oc in the list of lovers but is all good some of the girls seme a little farst.Over all the ff is great you Could use some help with describeing thing like clotheing.
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