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Lopoi_Jupoi
Lopoi_JupoiLv112yr
2022-10-28 01:13

Trash the level of writing is bad the author doesnt know how to make the novel exiting too much filler

As An Immortal, I Only Learn Forbidden Skills

Vast Sky Drizzle
3.8
1289 Chs

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KeazL_
KeazL_Lv13

There not much filler in this novel but that's your opinion and I respect it.

2yr
5
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Caliburns
CaliburnsLv15

The MC knows how to be patient and bide his time. The story is slightly slower paced but I actually enjoy it. The pace is perfect in my opinion, and I can see this novel making it up there with the known classics. Its worth reading, give it a try!

2yr

KeazL_
KeazL_Lv13

Raw : 长生不死的我只练禁术 .................

2yr
fegha
feghaLv4

It was really good until the mc suddenly just gets saint level (the stongest cultivation state in this book) techniques, relics, treasures in succesion after he established his foundation :(. Before that he has to make do with subpar, forbidden techniques and bide his time against his enemies. It was way more interesting back then.

1yr
Mark_Mads
Mark_MadsLv1

At the beginning, you think that this is a novel about a smart protagonist. But it is not!. The main character is a kind, ordinary Chinese beta male. Everything happens after chapter 20. The translator folded his handkerchief after chapter 19 .. The MTL of this novel is normal.

2yr
72demons
72demonsLv14

Honestly i feel a bit guilty in rating it 2 stars. For 200 or so chapters this novel is worthy 4.5 stars (I consider 5 stars a masterpice), but starting from chapter 300 something onwards its quality goes down to the point that around chapter 400 it is absolute trash. It is obvious how the author couldn't sustain the required chapter output and the quality of the novel suffered dramatically. The webnovel system, where quantity matter more than quality, reaped another victim.

1yr
Odorico
OdoricoLv6

Reveal spoiler

2yr
TinyBookDragon
TinyBookDragonLv4

Started off good. Didn't stay good.

1yr
Max_Zeon
Max_ZeonLv1

4/5 + until Black Rock Ruins, then the quality drops real fast. The translation is good but there are issues with pronouns in most of the chaps, but it was still okay. The story was progressing nicely and everything was good. But during Black Rock Ruins, everything goes downhill, the translation goes off, there is even no mention of who the pronoun is denoting. Then there is a continuous series of face slapping moments. MC defeats one guy whom everyone thinks he can't defeat and persuades him to step back. then another guy comes and same thing keeps on repeating. Dropping the novel now. Might resume it if it gets completed.

1yr
Uh_YEAH
Uh_YEAHLv2

Advice "At least be selfish for your own sake, if it's advantageous for the sake of strength then do "beneficial" things like fawning over the young master/princess. if it's just an ordinary person do you want to be "robinhood" come on be selfish for yourself. good but if you do it many times it might look "disgusting".

2yr
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