I am writing from a translator so there may be problems. firstly, the boy's height of 1.35 is too small, in 3 years he should grow up a lot with his mentor, because I am sure that there are many potions for this. secondly, his ignorance with all this purebredness, I’m sure that for 3 years his mentor taught him, well, his character is definitely strange, then with Pendragon he is an active Gryffindor, then with Daphne and Tracy a quiet huff. I will follow the fanfic, but I hope that the story will be rewritten a little, otherwise it will be impossible to read
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First, Thanks for reading! Second, thanks for the critique, My native language is Spanish, and I'm using a translator to publish fast the novel in English. I will try to rewrite the chapter when I have more time.