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RedSky_4561
RedSky_4561Author1yrRedSky_4561

I'm the first here, I hope I'm not the last. I have a good story in mind. The first chapters are the story before the story, since it deals a little before the birth of the protagonist, but it is necessary. It is a novel with adult content, but that does not mean that it neglects the plot. Sun God is a cultivation novel, but it is not wuxia. I confess that you can find some wuxia influence here, but it is not the main topic. Hello, this is my first novel, I hope you like it. I am a novice hobbyist. I hope to improve as the story progresses, thanks to the people who read this. English is not my native language, so please excuse the grammar.

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Inversedeath
InversedeathLv15Inversedeath

I also wanted to ask you will the cultivation system be fleashed out like the realms of the mc will be unique and he will trie to break his limit because that would be a great way to highlight his talents

Re_shin
Re_shinLv3Re_shin

The novel is very good. But I think you should change the name of the novel. I like it because the name is not long. But a little ordinary. Enjoy, this is just a suggestion.

RedSky_4561
RedSky_4561AuthorRedSky_4561

Your recommendation is well received. How would you name it?

Re_shin:The novel is very good. But I think you should change the name of the novel. I like it because the name is not long. But a little ordinary. Enjoy, this is just a suggestion.
Re_shin
Re_shinLv3Re_shin

Dude, this is your novel, so I'm not as familiar with the subject as you are. So I'm going to name a few that come to mind. I hope you can be inspired by them. Lustful Sun God The Sun God Desiring Eternity Dual Cultivator Sun God Rise Of The Sun God Don't forget. This is your novel. So don't make any changes you don't want.

RedSky_4561:Your recommendation is well received. How would you name it?
RedSky_4561
RedSky_4561AuthorRedSky_4561

What's different about him is his special physique, he'll have to cultivate his physique step by step, and he'll get a huge advantage over other cultivators because of it. The advantages of him will be his bloodlines and his special physique. His natural talent will be superior to everyone.

Inversedeath:I also wanted to ask you will the cultivation system be fleashed out like the realms of the mc will be unique and he will trie to break his limit because that would be a great way to highlight his talents