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Spabsta
SpabstaLv141yr
2023-04-21 10:50

I like it, the segg scenes are nice and the outline or the world seems great too. At first I thought his dad was the mc 😶‍🌫️

Lustful Sun God

RedSky_4561
4.9
94 Chs

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RedSky_4561
RedSky_4561Author

A person will help me with the grammar, in the next few days he will start correcting and the story will be more fluent, thank you all for supporting this work, I'm just a newbie, I'm not a professional, but, I have a story to tell.

1yr

Re_shin
Re_shinLv3

It started a little fast but well. A huge success as it didn't start with the classic Trash Young Master. It's great that their relationship isn't just seggs as he's not an emotionless MC. I love adult novels, but it's hard to read without emotions.

2yr
Ihaveacat
IhaveacatLv11

I like the novel, very good would recommend. Although a bit slow the concept is wonderful. Hope for more

2yr
AbAdDoN
AbAdDoNLv14

A good novel. This novel has everything but it only lacks frequent update and he/she as well as her/him are interchanged sometimes but as long as the updates get stable all will be good

1yr
LaziestMan
LaziestManLv4

i crossed over with Immortal System . Go and read it i am sure you will like it

1yr
Slifirenti_snake
Slifirenti_snakeLv4

This novem PoTentiel Is one of the best i have seen if this novel gets to at least 1 chapter a day And not losing its quality i will donate 20 dollars

1yr
Alphaget_Lopez
Alphaget_LopezLv10

this novel is interesting, it looks good, I really like how it is going so far, I hope many more chapters, cheer up author, I hope I don't screw it up

2yr
Blueslife
BlueslifeLv13

It's a new novel that has an interesting start, keep it up. I hope people support this novel, I think it's worth it.😬😬😬😬😬😬

2yr
Manoj_Jain_3208
Manoj_Jain_3208Lv3

A huge success as it didn't start with the classic Trash Young Master. It's great that their relationship isn't just seggs as he's not an emotionless MC. I love adult novels, but it's hard to read without emotions. I would like give it a solid 5 star but author didn't post new chapters regularly.

10mth
Illona_sama_5462
Illona_sama_5462Lv3

Hello Author, I really like the writing quality, your stability, the development, the world background but maybe, my problem can be on the character, but I give you all the rest of the marks because of your "I'm not a professional, but I have a story to tell." You also said it is your first story, so I would like to encourage you. è_é Please, I hope you always find your inspiration and creativity to strive. As an author myself, I want to learn a bit from other authors and I will like to read your books to learn. Good job and keep going!

1yr
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