Review Detail of CharleyP in The Odyssey of the Chosen One
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this is the rewrite of the first version. I enjoyed the first very much. this version is so far going well. the world building is good, characters are entertaining, story progressed well. i hope the author continues with the story and maybe add a few more worlds. keep it up and thank you for the story.
The Odyssey of the Chosen One
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it has changed up a little but the name is True God's Successor: A Trip to Become the Strongest. the first went through dd, god eater , and stopped part way through magi.
LewdSenPai:What's name for first version? Is it the same like this one?
you're true , some of chapter in that tittle is delete by now only 2 chapter . how much lev's harem have /world ? If you still remember?
CharleyP:it has changed up a little but the name is True God's Successor: A Trip to Become the Strongest. the first went through dd, god eater , and stopped part way through magi.
don't remember but home world he has all the ones he has now, in dd I believe he has most of the most of the women I can't honestly remember as for the rest but does have a couple kids from God eater and I think dd
LewdSenPai:you're true , some of chapter in that tittle is delete by now only 2 chapter . how much lev's harem have /world ? If you still remember?
it's worth a read if you can find it on other sites I just had the link still in my book marks for this site
LewdSenPai:maybe i should re-watch God Eater lol
I read on the other site , which goes by name john ? Is it that same as you read in the first version ?
CharleyP:it's worth a read if you can find it on other sites I just had the link still in my book marks for this site
LewdSenPai:I read on the other site , which goes by name john ? Is it that same as you read in the first version ?
true but close to when the magi part started he had gotten a general and another girla from the military to be in his harem as well. btw this part might be a spoiler for those that didn't read the first book so ignore this and I was just waiting for th3 par5 when he gets to fight his real moms( not his adoptive mom) family it was going to be epic but then got dropped :( đ
CharleyP:don't remember but home world he has all the ones he has now, in dd I believe he has most of the most of the women I can't honestly remember as for the rest but does have a couple kids from God eater and I think dd
LewdSenPai:you're true , some of chapter in that tittle is delete by now only 2 chapter . how much lev's harem have /world ? If you still remember?