The story is very good, it adjusted quite well for me, so I can't find any errors in my mind, maybe the beginning of the story felt weird but I guess it was because I don't know one piece, even so it was resolved by reading more chapters where I understood everything perfectly this indicates a good writing, so I recommend reading it, give it a try, I am not disappointed since, I spent my night reading this
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