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2022-10-23 11:37

Good story so far, so giving 5 Star to keep you going. Please correct the spelling and grammar mistakes though. Story can use a bit less descriptions according to me, but till now it's good keep going and make it good so this review does not goes to West.

Reincarnated Normie

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Author here, I am new to writing as well as English is not my first language so there might be some grammar mistakes but I will try to find any and all once I am sure of what to do with this story. Thanks for reading. Please like if you found this enjoyable, comment any suggestions you have they are most welcome 🙏. Also support if you are able to. Thanks and Regards, UnluckyMortal

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Good start, unique concept need to see if execution is good or not. Not giving the main character a name before he was given a name was a good touch. Looking forward to what this new spin on already exhausted genere gives us. Keep going.

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