great idea, the relationship is a bit forced and out of nowhere but would make sense with the circumstances, unlike a lot of trash fics the conversations feel natural and people are not just cardboard, waiting for more (chapter 10)

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

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Enjoyable dialogue, slightly rushed relationship developments, great fight scenes and character development. Looking forward to more chapters.

It’s a somewhat good stories but it has some flaws . The main one being how the mc is a major hypocrite. The mc’s whole goal is to be the “quirkless hero” but thing is he does have a quirk. Its not literally a quirk but he has multiple diffrent powers and quirks are just powers . Its like saying your not racist since you don’t hate Chinease people but then you say that all Indian people are idiots and that you hate them .

Hey author, can I continue and rewrite this novel?

Good start. Like your thinking style. Don't drop please. Instead of pure physical warrior try both physical and mental path. But that is just my opinion. Ultimately it's your story and you decide what your endgame is.

Like it’s good but I don’t know if I’m trippin. To me I feel like the MC simply can’t care and it will only get worse as the series goes on. When Mina asks for them to take a break because he was starting to scare her, his only realization was, yes he is becoming a monster but “so what”. With this I feel like any chance for him to show any real emotion is gone and I feel like he is nothing but a shell for the author to write a Giga chad mc who’s so sigma that all the girls fall for him and he loves his women but also could care less because he only cares about get more power. With this thought in the back of my mind is what made me want to stop reading cause I didn’t want to read a story about a dead shell who can’t only falsify his emotions to appear human to those around him. Like I don’t know if I’m just trippin and over analyzing but I couldn’t stop viewing the series like this.

It has some good potential. Great fight scenes, but forced character interactions. The Quirkless Idea brought it all down since he is technically not quirkless. And instead of slowing his progress, the author introduced magic to the story. The writing quality is mediocre too. Sometimes, mispelling and grammar mistakes happen, and occasionally, there are some parts you won't understand. It is a refreshing read but, it has big flaws.