Review Detail of ArcSan in My Qi Keeps Resetting

Sup! Writing Quality: Its quite readable. But I don't like the way grammar is structured in many places, for example the way when you introduce the Qi Gathering Technique. Stability of Updates: Too early to say anything but I think you will do amazing here. Story Development: My biggest gripe is this. You have a unique concept and hit it write but why the hell do you introduce so many tropes in the beginning, it makes me bored and think this is another copy of Wuxia Novels. Character Design: Good Work here, I feel they are quite natural. WB: Yup again you have great idea. You are building from bottom to top so I would like to feel a lot more tension and mystification of things. Overall the biggest problem is the beginning of the Story. It feels boring but if you can make it more intense and full of mystery then this would be a 5 star Novel !