webnovel
avatar

Review Detail of maniac_008 in MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

Review detail

maniac_008
maniac_008Lv1410mthmaniac_008

I really like the idea and concept of the novel so far up to which chapter I have read(278). Still there are a lot of inconsistencies in the novel. I feel. Firstly there are many unnecessary information in most of the chapters taking up a lot of unnecessary words which could be used somewhere else. Also, a proper world background is missing, with information here and there that does not make much sense. It is better to use an extra chapter before the novel begins like some novels here do, where they provide a general outlook to the whole world background. It will no doubt contain some spoilers but it will help the reader understand the world more. I suggest providing a chapter before the novel starts which consists of information regarding the power ranks and the levels they relate to. Also a chapter on the world background of the world the mc is in currently. It will help all readers going into the novel. I hope this suggestion maybe helpful a little.

altalt

MMORPG: Rise of the Primordial Godsmith

TrueDawn

Liked by 2 people

LIKE

Replies1

Pedotosi_Phillip
Pedotosi_PhillipLv2Pedotosi_Phillip

I just wanted to inform everyone of this awesome and great new novel.I feel like this novel deserves more audience.truly a great novel, I hope that everyone who sees this.gives this novel a chance, it is truly interesting and am sure you won't regret giving this novel a chance.The name of the novel is:Eradawn: Mythos Unveiled