The story has now hit 20 chaps so I can make a review now. If you came here expecting action every chapter turn around cause it's not for you. The story has a more slice of life feel to it. It's very comedic and will provide you with a good laugh. Anyone that knows about cyberpunk knows this story will have some action cause it's Night City. "City of dreams... City of gang gang gang gang" Sorry had to mention the song Gr4ves cause it fits Night City so much. Back to the review ill try to shorten my thoughts. Mc is a character that doesn't fear death cause he experienced a fate worse than death. We already have a live interest from the game that Mc is childhood friends with. The author did it in a way that does not go against her character but also kept her from pitching for the other team. There are other things I would like to say but I would like this review stay under the 1000 characters. So yeah my review. Also I would love for this to update everyday but I can't be talking.

Well worth the read as it takes a rather unique approach to the cyberpunk universe and is done in such a way that you can’t wait till the next chapter drops

This isn't a good fanfiction - it's a GREAT fanfiction! Everything is on point from the writing to the characters to the comedy and romance. Well done.

Harem or no harem? A lot of authors are starting to make their books a harem book without adding the harem tag because “they didnt know if it would be added”. Please tell me here if it is or not

if you like it, please write a good review. be a good Choom like MeepsNewGroove and Drakion

Is a good story, but it's running by author not following the rule of "show don't tell". The story is basically 110% telling... If author tries to reduce his word count by 60% (i.e. conversely their words with the least number of words & put together in the most impactful fashion possible) it would turn this good story into a great one. Significant majority of the story is burdened by unnecessary words and sentences.

love it. in the latest 2 chapters especially. I was listening to thr same music they were. wq: 5 sd: 5 cd: 100 us: 5 wb: 5

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Probably my favorite cyberpunk fic so far. Really good details, and author doesn’t skimp at all with the background. Props to him as writing background info and details for a game world so big is very difficult. Has a good plot and is just generally top tier as it has nothing unrealistic or bad to it. Only tip I would give for the author is to work on describing the characters looks a little more. Good stuff.

Nice idea for story and everything. But there i can't put a finger on what, but this story can't keep me engage to keep reading it. I don't know what but this is second story like that i have found.