You need to work a lot on your writing. Your sentences are generally 3-5 times as long as they should be, periods nowhere in sight, and it makes it really problematic to read. I'm not going to comment on the content, but your actual writing ability/skill in general needs a fair bit of training before it's even at a somewhat acceptable level. Right now, I'm constantly pulled out of your story and have to re-read things at times because it's so poorly put together. It's not worth the bother to keep reading. Of course you will be spammed with 4-5 stars because this is Webnovel, but don't believe them: they're starving and would eat literally anything. Both for your future readers' as well as your own sake, go back to the basics and learn how to write legibly before sharing more stories.

If I had the money to commision stuff... I'd be poor

Why did he need to be reincarnated as a devil if he could just copy their body

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

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The idea of a fleshcrafter in DXD is nothing new however it holds much potential! Sadly the MC is way too Op already due to the apparent lack of limits on his ability. The moment he touched Rias/Sona/Akeno/Koneko he wouldn't even need to be near them anymore as he would theoretically be strong enough to fend of most opponents and combined with his sacret gear he wouldn't even have to become a devil as he could make himself a dragon and with his ability he can already make every waifu imaginable without causing the suspicion of the powerhouses of that world. He just needs biomass and honestly he doesn't even need humans for that. A way too op protagonist with a broken ability just drains the appeal of most fics and all romantic appeal the story might have had is gobe considering him being able to create new waifus out of nowhere. He has tge same abilities as Kuro but without his yolo attitude and his charm, intelligence and ambition.

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It's not bad. The story itself is exactly what you would expect from DXD wish fulfillment so nothing groundbreaking, but the only major issue is how ugly the wiring is. It's not unreadable by any means, in fact, the grammar is one of the better aspects of the story, but the sentence structure is abhorrent. Run on, after run on, after run on with commas acting in place of periods like that somehow makes it a complete sentence. It doesn't. But aside from that it's fine.