Review Detail of AngelKnightZed in I Swear My Pool Don't Have A Python

would've been a good story, but is horribly word-bloated... a single event is stretched over around half a dozen chapters... i got frustrated before finishing reading the initial free chapters, the writing tone felt insulting with what could have been a simple paragraph devolved into a rambling mess, just to increase word count. good luck to other readers that want to endure this, i would rather save my brain cells than hold in my vomit from reading this nauseous clickbaity translation...