Item: Unfortunately, She Is Mine
Rating: 4.8
Author: AYESHA_FAHIM

AYESHA_FAHIMLv12yr

2022-10-24 03:59

The narrative was good, but you still need to work on it. I'm not saying I didn't like it or that it wasn't good; it was good. Your storyline was intriguing, and I enjoyed how you described everything, you've done hard work, but a little hard work more, and your story will be excellent. 🥰

Unfortunately, She Is Mine

Axel_Ash

4.5

19 Chs

Liked by 4 people

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Axel_AshAuthor

Thank you so much

2yr

William_HappinessLv4

love to check it out but I have too many books on my list.

2yr

Other Reviews

VeraMeraLv10

Overall a good read! Your plot is intriguing and the way you set up your characters is good. Keep up the good work!

2yr

PixiesONELv1

While the story seems interesting enough, the writing quality is a bit lacking at times, edits could be made to easily make it better, but overall, this seems like a decent book, though im not usually one to read romance novels, so my opinion on it may not be the best.

2yr

Rin_NurniaLv4

You need to do more proofreading since there are some mistakes that I already pointed out in the comments section

2yr

ArcSanLv1

I am the no romance type of guy but this is quite fun to read. A sure time banger ! Great job in making this feel entertaining. 4.6/ 5 I hope you write more!

2yr

IlyananasLv1

I don’t usually read romamce novels, but this one got my attention. i like the character and the plot. 4.4/5 Would recommend

2yr

MaryahLuLv11

Reading the story is enjoyable and fun. The chapters are crafted to perfection. The author's descriptive skills really put us inside the novel.

2yr

Emmy_ThomsonLv1

your story is unique, but I love it, I hope you complete it. [img=coins][img=exp][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

2yr

RomanceFanatic028Lv4

Okay, so the storyline was very interesting. It's been a long time since i read about billionaire genre so it was refreshing. Everything was great, except the writing style. I don't know why but something felt off. I am sorry if it offended you but some dialogues seemed very weird to hear it. Overall, the grammatical errors can be fixed easily. It happened to me too, so it's not a big deal. I wish you all the best. And hope you keep doing better.

2yr

Husniya_SLv12

Great story with a captivating start. It has a good narrative. I can see a promising plot. The synopsis is great, however, you didn't have to make it that long. A brief and concise synopsis saves the reader a lot of time. I would recommend you shorten your synopsis. The dialogue, if not an important part of the story, is not necessary in the synopsis. Loved the cover. Keep up the good work.

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