Item: Femdom Island
Rating: 5
Author: Raven_Master

Raven_MasterLv142yr

2022-12-15 06:49

besides some grammar problems witch probably not the authors fault it really good and I hope the author doesn't drop it

Femdom Island

ElectricLuna

4.5

245 Chs

Liked by 5 people

Replies6

Raven_MasterLv14

I'm not talking about he and she grammar problems btw

2yr

ElectricLunaAuthor

Thanks for the review, I'll try to reduce grammar problems as much as I can💖

Raven_Master:I'm not talking about he and she grammar problems btw

2yr

Raven_MasterLv14

your doing great, just don't drop that's all I ask 🙏🥺 you don't know how many novels I liked but ended up dropping 😔 sigh😔

ElectricLuna:Thanks for the review, I'll try to reduce grammar problems as much as I can💖

2yr

Kw0zLv14

Idk about the author, but I wouldn’t trust you when it comes to critiquing grammar.

2yr

Raven_MasterLv14

ohhh and why's that

Kw0z:Idk about the author, but I wouldn’t trust you when it comes to critiquing grammar.

2yr

Kw0zLv14

Just look at your review. The grammar is terrible.

Raven_Master:ohhh and why's that

2yr

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