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AnotherAtlas
AnotherAtlasLv22yr
2022-11-10 04:52

Writing quality is mostly fine. Updates are also fine. The start of the story is interesting, but I'm not a big fan of him becoming a mascot in the town and hanging around with humans. Feels like every generic monster mc. Speaking of generic mc, so far he's lacking in personality. Closer to a dog than a monster with a human's mind type of personality . Big fan of the monster hunter world, well, world, although never played the games, the idea itself is nice.

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AkashicLibrary
AkashicLibraryLv1

Its mutual help. He doesnt get attacked by the humans and in return he doesnt attack. Also its more like friends then dogs as current him could’ve destroyed the village with ease yet he didnt

AnotherAtlas
AnotherAtlasLv2

Also, even if the mc was a corgi, he could bite people's throats out while they are asleep. A german Shepard can straight up destroy you. So he can still be compared to a dog.

AkashicLibrary:Its mutual help. He doesnt get attacked by the humans and in return he doesnt attack. Also its more like friends then dogs as current him could’ve destroyed the village with ease yet he didnt
Chromacorn
ChromacornLv4

If you read what his reasoning for doing so is I feel like it makes perfect sense. He doesn’t want to get hunted down until he’s too powerful to stop so he’s paying the safe route and making them think he’s not a danger to people. I would honestly probably do the same.

AnotherAtlas
AnotherAtlasLv2

I think if he acted neutral and did his own thing, they wouldn't attack him. I understand that he might be thinking in a 'better safe than sorry', but as a reader, I don't find this option necessary or fun. There's a better alternative for me.

Chromacorn:If you read what his reasoning for doing so is I feel like it makes perfect sense. He doesn’t want to get hunted down until he’s too powerful to stop so he’s paying the safe route and making them think he’s not a danger to people. I would honestly probably do the same.
AkashicLibrary
AkashicLibraryLv1

Do the dogs do it because they can? No they dont. They do this because 1:they love their owner or 2: mutual benefits Oh and did i mention having THOUSANDS of extremely skilled hunter chasing you if he kills them?

AnotherAtlas:Also, even if the mc was a corgi, he could bite people's throats out while they are asleep. A german Shepard can straight up destroy you. So he can still be compared to a dog.
AnotherAtlas
AnotherAtlasLv2

I don't think I said he has to kill them. Stop it with the dog fetish. I literally have a dog irl. My point is that the mc ain't a reincarnated dog, he's a reincarnated human.

AkashicLibrary:Do the dogs do it because they can? No they dont. They do this because 1:they love their owner or 2: mutual benefits Oh and did i mention having THOUSANDS of extremely skilled hunter chasing you if he kills them?
AkashicLibrary
AkashicLibraryLv1

Do you even know the meaning of fetish im just using dogs as example

AnotherAtlas:I don't think I said he has to kill them. Stop it with the dog fetish. I literally have a dog irl. My point is that the mc ain't a reincarnated dog, he's a reincarnated human.
AnotherAtlas
AnotherAtlasLv2

Obviously

AkashicLibrary:Do you even know the meaning of fetish im just using dogs as example
AkashicLibrary
AkashicLibraryLv1

Then why did you say i had a dog fetish?

AnotherAtlas:Obviously
AnotherAtlas
AnotherAtlasLv2

... Because you keep going after the dog point and are very defensive towards the "accusation".

AkashicLibrary:Then why did you say i had a dog fetish?
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