Review Detail of ArcSan in World of Summoners

Well. I guess it only makes sense that I write a introduction here now that some chapters are up and readers have something to read. Well I have whole heartedly tried to create a story that my readers can enjoy while also trying to take care that normal pitfalls don't come up in my Writing that make the reading a frustrating experience. If you have any suggestions, please dont hesitate to type them, I will genuinely try to listen to advice if anybody reads my work!