interesting concept, but extremely repetitive. MC feeds on low level mutant rejects to build up her strength for a hundred chapters. The MC spends a bit of time being trained by shield, before ditching them to continue feeding on mutants on a larger scale. There's a lot of spelling mistakes. There's also a glaring pothole that the author tried to fill early, but the way it's fixed doesn't make any sense: eating dirt and rocks can gain MC "mass" so that she can evolve and create minions at first, but it's then nerfed: the more she feeds on something, she gets diminishing returns, which makes no sense because of the law of conservation of mass. out also means that her growth is massively unsustainable, and she'll rapidly reach her growth limit before consuming everything on the planet. basically, this story only needs an actual storyline, coherent lore and some proofreading to be great
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