Review Detail of Nic345 in Reincarnating in the world of Naruto

Item: Reincarnating in the world of Naruto
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Nic345Author1yrNic345

Im new to this kind of thing so if you see any errors please let me know. __________________________________________________________________

Reincarnating in the world of Naruto

Nic345

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BullYaLv4BullYa

everythings is perfect maybe try to pay more attention to proper usage of she hers and he his because very often you use he for female characters

1yr

CosmicanalogLv10Cosmicanalog

What awaits us in this story?

1yr

YourGrandfatherLv14YourGrandfather

Maybe writing a proper description so people vaguely know in which direction the story will go will help to make people more interested in the story. I tell you I'm not interested. So I won't read it.

1yr

Nic345AuthorNic345

That's ok. Thanks for the advice though I've just been really lazy recently, I just started my first job and kind of forgot about this but I’ll definitely fix it. Have a good day

YourGrandfather:Maybe writing a proper description so people vaguely know in which direction the story will go will help to make people more interested in the story. I tell you I'm not interested. So I won't read it.

1yr