Review Detail of Drew_Sansone in Lost: To Be Found
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Yeah I’m hooked. Author you won. Take my coins. For anyone debating trying this there was another in-depth review so I won’t touch on the points they do. Rather the one suggestion rather is to the author, you’ve set up an amazing world with a lot of potential. In my opinion something that could give this world the depth it deserves is lore. “Where did magic originate?” “Who had the idea of integrating bloodlines?” “Where are the origins of these bloodlines and if gone where did they go?” Etc etc. Add short tales and fables with this world you built and thank you for writing!
Lost: To Be Found
AngelAsphodel
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Thank you very much for both your support and feedback! I really do appreciated it and I'll take it to heart. Just in terms of lore, I do want to approach some more stuff and some of what you mentioned has already been covered to some extent in later chapters, but I'm keeping the world building slow. Hearing that you want more lore definitely encourages me to include it more though!
Like I loved the whole bit about her mom’s bloodline and where is came from. Stuff like that is awesome at least to me and adds so much more depth to the story. Keep it up! ❤️
AngelAsphodel:Thank you very much for both your support and feedback! I really do appreciated it and I'll take it to heart. Just in terms of lore, I do want to approach some more stuff and some of what you mentioned has already been covered to some extent in later chapters, but I'm keeping the world building slow. Hearing that you want more lore definitely encourages me to include it more though!