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Too many plot holes and inconsistencies, no MC improvements, no sense in the story. You told the readers that it is 24m sec so that's about .76 in years but the title says its 24m hrs so that's about 2739 years. Do you even know how it would feel to stretch time that long in 24hrs? It would be very hard to move. The story didn't imply any special body ability, no friction resistance whatsoever. Increase in speed means increase in mass. Not to mention his clothes should be burning with the friction because of him moving too fast. Asuming that he has the resistance of this type of movement what hasnt he made any improvements? He should be at the very least stronger after 24hrs. Please learn physics or at the very least look at some references, like the flash maybe. It would be understandable if he had the body of a kryptonian but no.

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Marvel: 2.4 Billion Hours a Day

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as I already made clear, the fic is not mine, I'm doing MTL