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naughtius_maximus
naughtius_maximusLv1315h
2024-12-11 14:15

the book is really good, my only problem is that there's no rest for the dude from one annoying situation to the other.

God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.

Demons_and_I
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684 Chs

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Demons_and_I
Demons_and_IAuthor

Thanks for the review :). And just as the saying goes; There is no rest for the wicked )

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The plotlint makes sure to keep you going the more the book continues to go. It's quite amazing to be honest, and I'm quite sure this book will keep me invested as I go,

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The plot is interesting and somewhat unique. It borrows from tried and true popular themes and stories but adds its own spin to it. Initially, I had this novel reviewed at about 3.5 stars, but with the author's revision of their chapters making it a much more enjoyable story to read, I've changed my review as I said I would. I hope to see more good things for this author in the future!

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Demons_and_I
Demons_and_IAuthor

Greetings and Salutations... 🧐So there wasn't a lot of activity this month, but I promise next month, I won't fail to deliver every single day. If there are any questions you have about 'God Ash' feel free to drop them down here. I'll answer to the best fo my abilities...I'd like to get as much feedback from you guys as possible...TNX

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I'mma give myself 5 stars for the effort. Now, for the good part. I've begun editing this book from the beginning. I've edited about 9 chapters, ironed out typos and grammatical errors to make the book more enjoyable. If you have been reading this book for a while I sincerely apologize for this inconvenience, as the new story has more than a few differences with the old version. Read to find out 😁. I am trying my best to iron out all the details. So please, bear with me. I promise not to disappoint you. Thank you 🤗

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I think it's time I updated this because I think I've done a very good job turning this book into something I'm proud of. Don't forget to buy chapters with coins. It really helps a lot in motivating the story... Thank you 🤗. If you can, be a privilege readers to read 2 chapters ahead of everyone else 😉

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Demons_and_I
Demons_and_IAuthor

Hello everyone ... As this the first book I'm writing, I'll be very hopeful. I don't have much experience as a writer, but I hope I don't disappoint too much... I hope this book manages to capture your attention and keep it all the way...

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McWms99
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So firstly I just wanna state that this is actually a good novel, could even be great. I have issues with a few things though. 1stly too much exposition, way too much exposition. This novel could actually benefit from breaking up and expanding the first few chapters to flush out more intricate details and better character development and such. I feel as though the Author loves this novel and has a great many ideas he wants to implement and it shows by coming off as if he's rushing the development of the story. There's a distinct difference between withholding information and slowly trickling it in after hooking the reader with great action beats and giving information dumps to get critical information out of the way. There are some grammar errors as well as spelling flaws, but by far the biggest issue is the exposition. Sometimes it even rips the reader out of immersion of the story. We gain information that could easily be told to us in more creative ways. Overall the author is creative and even though this is a systems novel, I feel they do a great job of utilizing it as a tool rather than the main focus. The main focus is the world, and there's thought put into this world, which is why the exposition drives me up a wall because you are taking away from truly expanding the beauty of the world. I know this may seem like a rant or bashing but I'm only being tough because you gotta gem here, slow down and polish that baby. If you establish that beginning right all that juicy tid bits i know your rushing to get to will pay off even more.

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Am I the only one who thought the cover arts hand was a dragon head???

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This book is a masterpiece. Now reincarnated gods are all time favorite of mine along with business. The descriptions the author provides along with the characters are just chef's kiss. I have read till going solo. So my opinion can change after reading more. Also loving the battle scenes along with overpoweredness of the mc. Lastly one last line for Scott- He just like me during my bad days fr fr

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AceAmbrosia
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The plot itself is incredibly engaging and enjoyable, but most of all, it's unconventional and unique. The writing quality is descriptive yet not overly so, making it an amazing read. Keep up the good work, author!

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