This has better lore than the actual game of thrones books XD author if you drop this like the madara one i'll come at you with a valyrian steel armour and sword

If I did half as much studying for my final exams as this man has done for this fanfic, I would've gone to Harvard. Like seriously, holy h*ll this is good.

The author studied a lot for this fic. He now knows the same as me on the Game of Thrones verse. The author also has pretty good grammar. Give this book a try, you won’t regret it. After all

he's a writer among writers. storyteller among storytellers. the man wrote two books that are equally addictive to read. Is this the power of God? what type of being are you? Are you even Human? all I got say, man, is to keep up the good work.

I almost never criticize a story, since I don't like to give my opinion critically about a work done by others without knowing the project that the author is carrying out to be able to create this.However, I must say that this story has captivated me enormously, from its development, to the level of explanation it has for someone who has not read the books, In addition to the fact that the story is entertaining and captivates you with each paragraph you read, there is no doubt that it is a good story, I only hope that the author continues to improve greatly

Read this when it had 11 (12 if you count the prologue) and its wonderful.

I am seriously so so pleased with this story. I have loved every chapter so far. Normally, what I read tends to be based on anime / manga or a video game. This? This is even better to me, which I never ever thought would be the case! The fantasy is so rich and there is so much beautiful detail, the world is alive in front of me when I'm reading. The story is intriguing and unique, full and yet there is not boring filler- the fullness is interesting for each chapter. The main characters that Koji has created are fun, interesting and have awesome interactions with each other, too. Unique characters, interesting and often funny interactions, the worldbuilding both including ASOIAF canon lore AND Koji's lore that he is creating for this story which fits SO perfectly, and of course, the magic!!!! Everything, seriously, is wonderful and I get so happy and fangirl-y whenever I get to read a new chapter! I also have no idea how Koji fits lore so perfectly into this story- I could never. It's not just a this-place-here it's in details I never knew! And I love to research my fandoms! Plus his own lore is just so fitting that I am not always sure where his starts and ASOIAF's begins until I ask or look something up! It's so natural! Okay, I am going to stop fangirling now, well, at least until the next chapter. ^_^;

one of the most promising takes on J.R.R Martin's work too date. The story as of chapter 26 gives us a much sought after look Into the Valerian Freehold just before the doom and so far the author has done an amazing job expanding off of canon to really bring the legendary city to life and show what the last golden years of the Freehold looked like from the MCs point of view. The story moving forward has amazing potential for longevity if done right and could turn into one of the longest fanfics of J.R.R Martin's work on site with the Mc hopefully gaining some sort of pseudo elf immortality to be able to experience events raging from just before The doom(88BC)all the way up until the final events of Game of Thrones(305AC) about 417years for the MC to experience all the world has to offer and with 3 continent with their own secrets, magic and lore all waiting for someone to discover. So if we're lucky and the update stability gods are kind we'll be in for a wild ride so sit back, relax and pray that they are listening.

it's pretty good so far, I like the prep for the doom instead of panic rush and leave type mentality he has. hope he grabs as much as he can before he leaves for good.